A beautiful place for a shot like this. The vignetting here is too much, it's only distracting rather than giving something to the scene itself.
I think you should re-visit this place in morning/evening light, feels like a place with fantastic atmosphere and possibilities for photography.
The scene is good, the shot is pretty ok. You could've worked more with the postwork I think. Also a tip for when you're using vignetting, either you don't have it or you have it bigger and softer. Here it's almost like a bad framing only.
I don't think I ticked the box "Request Critique" but I will take note of your criticism, although I warn you, I am too set in my ways to change the way I see the world through photography.In my many years working in photography I have seen too many could be good photographers bogged down with technicalities. At the end of the day it is if the image is pleasing to the taker, and an added bonus if it is pleasing to others. This image is obviously not to you, and I am sorry.